<div><blockquote class="gmail_quote" style="border-left: 1px solid rgb(204, 204, 204); margin: 0pt 0pt 0pt 0.8ex; padding-left: 1ex;">Here is my try at composing a lyric, never done such thing before in<br>this fashion in a great while so please take it with a grain of salt and you dont have to
<br>use it if its crap, or doesnt fit your style, whatever.<br><br>A Wonderfull Day<br><br>I want to see your crystal eyes<br>Even knowing they are just a lie<br>A robotic sound might emphasize<br>The truth i share in my synthetic dice
<br><br>No, no, no, you dont know<br>Knowing is not how you will find<br>The truth lies on a sober heart<br>And this my friend i dare to say<br><br>Lets make a perfect union<br>My sober heart and your crystal eyes<br>Spliced in one million bytes
<br>Flowing trough a great river<br>Reaching grandma dad and son<br><br>I could go even further<br>Not today, nor tomorrow<br>let the time decides its way<br>Rest in peace a wonderfull day</blockquote><div><br><br>Thanks. It looks good :-) Well, I cannot say I will use it. I will meditate on it. I want to feel it and if it triggers emotions, then I'll be able to try compose accordingly..
<br>If I use it, the idea is that I want to make many versions with the same lyrics..and share it with you..so you can say which one you prefer or you think is more appropriate with the lyrics context..<br><br><br><br><br>
</div><br></div><br clear="all"><br>-- <br>julien