It grooves, yes. And it's funky! BUT- there's a little too much "smile" in the vocals. Can you pull it back a little? Maybe a little less "sing-songy", if that makes any sense.<br><br><div class="gmail_quote">
On Sun, Aug 16, 2009 at 5:25 PM, Carlo Capocasa <span dir="ltr"><<a href="mailto:theman@carlocapocasa.com">theman@carlocapocasa.com</a>></span> wrote:<br><blockquote class="gmail_quote" style="margin:0 0 0 .8ex;border-left:1px #ccc solid;padding-left:1ex;">
Hi everyone!<br>
<br>
This is the first verse of my debut song Live Creator. It will be the<br>
first in a long series to be released on my site as CC attribution.<br>
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<a href="http://carlocapocasa.com" target="_blank">http://carlocapocasa.com</a><br>
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Suggested comments: Does it groove? Are there any errors or<br>
imperfections that irritate you? Do you like it? Does the mix sound<br>
different from what you are used to on your audio system? Does positive<br>
emotion come across?<br>
<br>
Thank you so much in advance for your help!<br>
<br>
Carlo<br>
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