[LAU] two new tracks

Atte André Jensen atte.jensen at gmail.com
Sun Aug 19 09:57:12 EDT 2007

Dave Phillips wrote:

>    http://linux-sound.org/audio/twisted.mp3

Nice. I like the sound, it's clean and crisp.

The guitar playing (you, I guess) is great. However I feel you should 
work out a few better versions of the turnback (I VI II V)

For instance in the final two bars before the "solo" you play | D B | Em 
A7 |, right? Those triads and clean dominant7 chords sounds out of 
context to my ears. Some of the following are fuller and richer and 
might sound more in place:

| D6   Bm7 | Em7 A7b9    |
| D6   Bm9 | Em9 A7b913  |
| D6/9 F13 | Em9 A7#9b13 |
| D6/9 F13 | E13 Eb13    |

Just my .01 :-)

peace, love & harmony

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