[LAU] more AVS/Csound "music"

[Garry Ogle]

Dave Phillips wrote:
> Greetings,
> 
> Thanks to everyone who lent their ears to my latest Csound/AVSynthesis 
> excursion. You're all very brave. :)

I don't know, it seems like a few of us are rather keen on this kind of 
thing.

> I've placed new versions on-line:
> 
>     http://linux-sound.org/audio/studiodave-avs_p01_090805.ogg
> 
>     http://linux-sound.org/audio/studiodave-avs_p01_090805.mp3
> 
> Not much different, but I reduced the gain on the nasty bits, it sounds 
> better now.

subtly but definitely.

> 
> Garry Ogle wrote:
>> If you're gonna publish this as a stand-alone piece - and I think you 
>> should - I would tidy the ending up a bit.
>>
>> My inclination would be to crop it at some appropriate point close to 
>> the end, and then reprise the quieter part of the beginning.
>>
>> does that make any sense to you?
>>   
> I followed your suggestion, G, but I'm not sure I care for the reprise. 
> If you like I'll send an OGG/MP3 of that arrangement and you can let me 
> know what you think of it. It sounds good, it just doesn't seem to do 
> anything special for the piece.
> 
> Best,
> 
> dp

Please do, Ogg is good.
The reason I made that (off-the-cuff) suggestion was that the ending 
seemed just a little abrupt. I thought a reprise might fix that and 
achieve an increased sense of closure.
I'm picking at very fine details here; it doesn't stand out as a flaw
in the piece. But then, as you surely know, attending to subtle details 
can make all the difference.

Regards, G.