[LAU] A new song..

[James Stone]

Dave Phillips wrote:
> Hi James,
> 
> I'm no critic of the style, but I enjoyed the song. Some 
> comments/suggestions:
> 
> The voice placement and presence are fine. New recordists tend to 
> undermix their vocals when they should be more up-front, but I like 
> where the voice is in this mix.
> 
> The drums are under-recorded. The part is fine, but it should either 
> have a different sound (i.e. a different kit) or more presence in the 
> mix. Or both.
> 
> Bass could use a wee bit more presence.
> 
> I like the lyrics. :)
>

Great! I spent all of 5 minutes coming up with them!! :) They are 
supposed to be quite inane... but I like that! :)

> A little dirtier sound might be appropriate for the style, but I'm not 
> sure how you'd achieve that effect.
> 
> HTH,
> 

Just uploaded a new version called "Red" (mixed based on your 
suggestions and mastered with jamin).. Maybe overdid the volume tho..

http://drop.io/your_clothes_are_red

James