[LAU] a strange little song..

[James Stone]

Hi everyone,

I just recorded this song last night on qtractor.. guitar thru vamp2 
bass direct in, vocals thu Sampson C01 and Behringer minimic800. Drums.. 
  soundfont.. and spent 2 mins on them !!:)

http://drop.io/jjoskmy

I think the song is way too high for my vocal range, and the mix seems 
very suspect, but I'm not too sure about how to resolve it..

This is actually a song I wrote for my band (with a female singer), 
which never seems to work very well, and I wanted to record it myself to 
see where we are going wrong - I think I recorded it way too fast which 
isn't a good start - should be more like 100bpm.. beyond that, it also 
needs to be really tight to sound even slightly OK. I'm really 
considering dropping it - but suggestions about how to improve the 
overall sound/composition would also be appreciated!

James