[LAU] Yet another song

[Oleg Ivanenko]

Hi, Robert!

Thank you very much for your opinion.

I think that disbalance between bass and guitar caused your laptop speakers.

It is 60's childish song, so I wanted to recreate "uncontemporary",
"undisciplined" panoraming of instruments -- bass at left, guitar at right
and  drums at center. So, if your speakers can't reproduce bass in left
channel you hear too loud guitar in right channel. Try to listen my first
mix&master attempt -- http://kompoz.com/t/91171, but I find it unsuccessfull
because of too overcompressed and loud bass.

About intro -- I think your sense of "incompletness" caused, consistent with
bass-issue, by too quiet bass drum(kick). I am working on that defer to
Harry's advice right now.

And yes, this song about the rain :). Briefly, it is said that inspite of
rain and cloudy sky I will not affray and sun will definitely rising again.
Try to understand automated translation of lyrics --
http://translate.google.ru/translate?hl=ru&sl=ru&tl=en&u=http://www.shansonprofi.ru/person/lebedinskaya/lyrics/lebedinskaya_nebo_v_tuchah_pervaya_pesnya_napisannaya_v_6_m_klas.html

2010/7/6 Robert Jonsson <spamatica at gmail.com>

> Hi Oleg,
>
> Listening on a laptop here (in the sun outside, ahhhhh, thank god for
> summer)
> As Harry mentioned the drums are a bit low, but for me it's more that
> the lead guitar is way too high in volume.
> The bass is mostly inaudible with these tiny speakers, perhaps it's
> possible to eq in some low-mids in the bass.
>
> I'm no expert but I would change the intro, perhaps remove the drums
> for a few bars (or the otherway around), it sounds a bit unfinished to
> me, or perhaps it's due to that I can't hear the bass..
>
> Apart from that a solid song, I like the break part with the rain(!?!)
> in the background :-)
> I also like that it's in russian though I can't understand a word.
>
> Regards,
> Robert
>
> 2010/7/6 Oleg Ivanenko <oivanenko at gmail.com>:
> > Hi!
> > Thanks for opinion and for note about direct link.
> >
> > 2010/7/6 M Watts <zwy648rct at gmail.com>
> >>
> >> On 07/05/2010 06:46 PM, Oleg Ivanenko wrote:
> >>
> >>> I have completed new(actually old) song recently --
> >>> http://kompoz.com/t/91208
> >>
> >> I really like this one; what else can I say? :)
> >>
> >> (Btw, for those w/o flash, there's a direct link to the mp3 in the
> page's
> >> source.)
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> > Truly yours, Oleg Ivanenko aka Ash
> > [if it wasn't so sad, it would be funny]
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-- 
Truly yours, Oleg Ivanenko aka Ash
[if it wasn't so sad, it would be funny]
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