[LAU] New arrangement and mix

S. Massy lists at wolfdream.ca
Thu Dec 29 18:33:53 UTC 2011


Hello,

Good stuff this morning, especially with a nice cup of tea...
Couple of things...

On Tue, Dec 27, 2011 at 10:46:12PM +0000, Folderol wrote:
> Well, back in harness again.
> 
> Thanks again for the suggestions.
> 
> I've reduced the bass,
It's just right now.

> faded down the running arpeggios selectively,
You might consider taking a little bit of its bite (High freqs) away as
well...

> added a little 'brightness' to one of the parts that makes up the main lead
> instrument,
Balances things out nicely.

> added another pan flute as a counter melody for the second section,
Great idea. It might feel more "right" if it were a little wetter or
maybe the first one drier.

> added another very faint instrument towards the end of the last section,
> perfomed some detail editing,
> revised the stereo positioning,
> made various mix adjustments.
> Phew!
Excellent work!  My only other final nitpicking observation might be
that one pad exhibits a little bit of low-mid exuberance on lower
octaves: one example is at 03:28. It might benefit from some gentle
taming.

Cheers,
S.M.


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