[LAU] Mix feedback on a new track?

[Will Godfrey]

On Sat, 04 Oct 2014 22:42:10 +0800
James Harkins <jamshark70 at qq.com> wrote:

> Hi all,
> 
> I just did a rough mix on a track... well, I think a little better than a 
> rough mix, but I can't go much further without some other ears having a 
> listen. All audio synthesis is in SuperCollider running in Ubuntu; then I 
> recorded stems on disk and loaded those up into Ardour (2) for easier 
> control over the mix.
> 
> A variety of influences at play here -- hope some of you enjoy it! 
> Generally I'd put it under the electronica label, though it doesn't exactly 
> fit.
> 
> http://www.dewdrop-world.net/audio/wiggle-room4.mp3
> 
> I'm using CC-BY-NC-SA for this, as I usually do -- tagged as such in the 
> MP3 comment field.
> 
> Thanks!
> hjh

Finally got time to have a listen to this (on a circa 1975 Mid-Fi). Overall
the mix sounded OK to me, but the hihat sounded more like a shaker. I think it
lacked bite. Having said that it fitted with the overall sound. I agree that
stylistically it could have done with more variation.

Interesting and enjoyable track.

-- 
Will J Godfrey
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