[LAU] Real Time (this is the name of a song, actually :p)

[jonetsu]

On Thu, 27 Oct 2016 02:53:54 +0100
Yassin Philip <philcm at gnu.org> wrote:

> https://soundcloud.com/yassinphilip/reel-time

This time with punch and warmth.  Starts very good, the feeling is put
in place quickly after a short intro, the voice is very good.  The bass
carries the warmth and makes a very good tandem with the drums.
Keyboard gives this airy atmosphere for dreams.

I still feel that there should be something happening at one point.
Perhaps only a slight modulation, a slight orchestral change, even if
the piece is short. To come back to the main section with something
added. The 'lead' sound that starts at approx. 2:10 might not be exactly
what the piece needs IMHO to make the contrast between dreams and
'real'. It kind of cringe along.  'real' is not necessarily that bad :)

Cheers.