El vie., 1 de mayo de 2020 19:12, Louigi Verona <louigi.verona@gmail.com> escribió:
Hey Diego!

Nice tune! I like how the mix starts, but later on it feels like it's either clipping or overcompressed. I would also really mind hihat and percussion levels, a lot of them might sound better if they are quieter, so that the beat feels more together. As a rule, I make hihats really-really quiet, this is one of the major tips of writing techno. Usually you reduce the loudness of the hiahat to 0 and then increase its loudness until you can make it out, but not louder than that.

I would also reduce the lows on most of the elements, by about 1.38 when the claps starts it becomes really crowded. I like the string at 6.20, very clean, but the mix itself is not breathing at this point and feels a bit flat, whereas I want to feel the dynamics and the groove. And what's interesting, the mix itself sound relatively clean, so a bit more dynamics could really make it awesome.

Cheers!




Hey Louigi!

Thank You very much for your sugestions.
Yes, I agree it feels overcompressed, I need to adjust some volumen levels.

It was recorded using timemachine with seq24 in live mode, so it needs to be rethought.

I Will take in account your suggestions!

Thank You very much.
Best regards
Diego


On Fri, May 1, 2020 at 11:26 PM Diego Simak <diego.simak@gmail.com> wrote:


El vie., 1 may. 2020 a las 14:02, Jeanette C. (<julien@mail.upb.de>) escribió:
May 1 2020, Diego Simak has written:
...
> https://soundcloud.com/diegosimak/tm-2020-05-01t125331
This sounds very electro nightclubby. I could imagine the kicks pumping
out a big PA. It also shows a non too often exposed side of Yoshimi. I
think I'd love to hear that in a Berlin underground club. :)

Best wishes,

Jeanette

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Hey Jeanette!

Thank you very much for listening.

Yeah, I would love to ear it in a underground club too.

Best wishes,
Diego
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