> Also, I'm not sure what you mean by 'laidback timing',
> but what I think you mean is the first piano loop which has some blanks
> which last too long (1 out of 4)?
Laid-back as in being slightly behind the beat, something used
in hip hop for a cool, relaxed feeling. Can also emphasize a
weighty, melancholic to depressing mood, so I assumed you did
it quite conciously, just a bit too much.
Ok, I see. Well, I don't know if it is intentional. But I'll try to improve this.
> The lead tries hard to be dramatic.
> >
>
> I don't understand. You mean that the guitar tries to be sad?
It's like watching a not particularly skilled actor trying to
convey a strong emotion. Sadly I can't pinpoint why it seems that
way to me. I recognise this propably sounds harsh, but I wouldn't
know how else to express it. Then again, maybe it was just my own
mood being to contrary :/
Haha, no its not harsh. I'm getting used to the way you talk :-)
So you mean that the dramatic thing isn't expressed well with the guitar? Do you talk particularily about
the guitar solo part?