I guess it's all personal taste, so here I am:
The melody is brilliant in its simplicity.
In the arrangement, there are too many middle frequencies - piano and
snare. The left hand of the piano plays the bass line, but the sound
is too hard for me.
So, I hear double-bass (low frq)
I hear hi-hat, and I hear cymbal in the B-part (high frq)
Also, I hear organ in the A-part, to soften the rhythm bit, but I also hear pizzicato strings, to spice it up gently.
I hear strings in the B-part.
Well, I was really inspired by that tune, thus I sat down and on Muse did a quick arrangements with the sounds I hear.
I will post it personally to you though, and then you decide what you
do with it. I was just playing with the music, probably relaxing at the
end of the first half-term here in the English schools.
Cheers
-
Viktor Mastoridis
Music-o-graph
& Educator
www.meditera.co.uk