15 Nov
2014
15 Nov
'14
1:07 p.m.
On Sat, 2014-11-15 at 13:53 +0100, Ralf Mardorf wrote:
On Sat, 15 Nov 2014 07:35:36 -0500
Dave Phillips <dlphillips(a)woh.rr.com> wrote:
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Ok, I'm short in time now, I would continue listening if I would have
more time yet, but IMO some notes are played with to less emotions, very
technically, less dynamic range. IMO still a nice composition, good
audio quality too, but consider to play it again or ask a friend who is
a good piano player, to play it for you. I dislike the way it's played.
Just a subjective opinion ;).
Regards,
Ralf
PS: I need to stop at around 20 minutes, but it's hard to do it.
Compliment :). Wow, at 19:19 there's a very nice part :).
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Oops, I pushed the wrong key first, my apologies.
Nice composition, odd playing, IMO the playing is to statically. Some
parts remind me of Zappa's "The Adventures of Greggery Peccary". I'm
still listening, didn't hear the whole piece yet. Until now, around 7
minutes I like it.