On Thu, May 2, 2013 at 5:48 PM, Set Hallstrom <sakrecoer@gmail.com> wrote:

Very cosy music!

I'd like to advise you to follow Q's advice, but make an exception on
the snare+bassdrum and the bassguitar.

I think the vocal level is good, but perhaps i would think different if
i understood what he says (beautyfull language btw)

Thanks for the music! Feel free to ad my email to any release anouncment
list.

*Set

On 2013-05-01 23:36, Q wrote:
> Probably a bit of everything -- might be as easy to do it on the master
> bus.
>
> Q
>
> On 01/05/13 22:32, James Stone wrote:
>> Thanks for listening, and thanks for the comments.. I will continue
>> tweaking :)
>>
>> What were you thinking I could cut low-mids from?
>>
>> James
>>
>> On Wed, May 1, 2013 at 8:20 PM, Q <lists@quirq.ukfsn.org
>> <mailto:lists@quirq.ukfsn.org>> wrote:
>>
>> On 01/05/13 09:27, James Stone wrote:
>>
>> HI Everyone,
>>
>> Here is a song I recorded with a friend of mine who is a Nepalese
>> singer, and one of his friends who played the guitar and bass
>> on the
>> track. It has taken me ages to get round to finishing it,
>> because I was
>> having real troubles coming up with some drums that fitted the
>> song OK.
>>
>> This is the current version, mixed in Mixbus. I would
>> appreciate any
>> thoughts on the song, and also the mix.
>>
>> https://soundcloud.com/__jmstone/roughmix2/download/s-__qgo8P
>> <https://soundcloud.com/jmstone/roughmix2/download/s-qgo8P>
>>
>> James
>>
>>
>> Hi
>>
>> Just had a listen to this and it sounds pretty nice as it stands.
>>
>> You could probably clear out the low mids a little to improve
>> clarity, but don't overdo it or you'll lose too much warmth.
>>
>> The vocal drops in and out a bit, especially early on (I think it's
>> probably the lower register bits that are most affected). I guess
>> it'd probably be better to automate the volume rather than compress,
>> although some light compression mightn't go astray. The guitar has a
>> tendency to overpower the vocal as well, but it might be okay once
>> the vocal level is higher, but if not, maybe EQ the guitar a bit to
>> reduce the clash.
>>
>> The main guitar solo (from 3.10) needs to be more upfront I'd say,
>> lose a lot of the reverb and it'd be a lot better. Perhaps use some
>> delay to make it big without pushing it into the background like the
>> reverb's doing. It's a bit thin sounding as well and the level a bit
>> inconsistent.
>>
>> It's a pleasant sounding piece, nice and mellow. Nice playing and
>> the singer's got a good voice. However, with not being able to infer
>> any emotional intensity from the vocals, it all sounds a bit flat,
>> on the same level -- the piece could do with some contour to it, a
>> sense of building and releasing in the music.
>>
>>
>> Q
>>
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