On Mon, Feb 16, 2009 at 12:43 PM, Roger E <
gurusonic@gmail.com> wrote:
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>
> Viktor Mastoridis wrote:
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>> The colour of voice is very nice. But try to record the voice in as much
>> as possible equal loudness - before you move to dynamics. Fill the channel
>> with iit. . Use compressor on the vocals as well - will help you get over
>> the beginner's problems with loudness.
>>
>> The rhythms guitar should be more tight - as you don't have bass/drums,
>> the rhythm guitar serves as the basis of this song, so it HAS to be rock
>> solid. Again, this is true before you learn to move slightly in time for the
>> effect of it.
>>
>> All in all the song is quite good - but you are not convinced in it. Try
>> to sing it as if you were sure that it will sell 100.000 copies - the
>> results will be amazing. One song reflects one own's confidence - or the
>> lack of it. "Losing My Religion" is so beautifully unconfident - and that's
>> the big asset of it. But your song needs confidence, actually.
>>
>> I hope this helps,
>>
>> Viktor
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>> 2009/2/16 Loki Davison <
loki.davison@gmail.com
>> <mailto:
loki.davison@gmail.com>>
>>
>> HI all,
>> despite the technical difficulties outlined in the other email some
>> recording did occur. It's a cheesy love song inspired by recent
>> events, some lyrics hopeful/prophetic/fictitious ;) Please tell me
>> what you think. I really need singing lessons....
>>
>> Same idea but in instrumental and vocal forms:
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>>
http://yoyo.its.monash.edu.au/~loki/scarlet_hair_novocals.mp3
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http://yoyo.its.monash.edu.au/%7Eloki/scarlet_hair_novocals.mp3>
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http://yoyo.its.monash.edu.au/~loki/scarlet_hair.mp3
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http://yoyo.its.monash.edu.au/%7Eloki/scarlet_hair.mp3>
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>> Instruments: acoustic guitar, electric bass and tambourine.
>>
>> Hope it's ok,
>> Loki
>>
>>
> I like it and agree with Viktor's comments. Push it, man, push it.
>