On Thu, Oct 20, 2011 at 07:55:59PM +0100, James Stone wrote: I know it's possible to direct download from soundcloud, but I don't know how. Would somebody mind telling me? Cheers, S.M.

On 21/10/11 05:55, James Stone wrote: Nice work -- I'm certainly no expert on shoegaze, but it definitely seems like it's in keeping with the genre to me. The structure actually reminded me more of electronic music than traditional writing, with the way it builds up from elements introduced at fairly regular intervals rather than having a strong verse/chorus/verse/chorus structure. That might make sense given how you put the track together, though :) I know it's the kind of genre that tends toward a slow burn, so I could be right off the mark here, but it felt like it could have done with some more textural variety by the end of it. I love the spacey, washed-out feel of the guitars, but I wonder if there's some other way you could mix up that texture in the second half of the track, rather than just building up the same guitar parts again. I'm afraid I can't offer any ideas, though! Thanks Leigh