[LAU] I Flying - new instrumental

[Oleg Ivanenko]

Hi, Mark!

>   When the first electric guitar comes in I think it's the wrong
> electric guitar. The type of distorion seems to cover too much
> spectrum and messes with the sounds of the other instruments.

I wait&afraid for that opinion, but You are right. What do you
thinking, can I improve solo equalization only?  I feel discomfort in
that place too and think that I should redo all solo part with lesser
distortion.

Thank you for all ideas.
>
>   The drums and bass aren't bad, but I think the drum sound is again
> sort of hidden at times by the guitar distortion.
>
>   When we get to the fast portion I think the distorted guitars sound
> good here, although they are as someone else said quite like Hotel
> California in terms of what the whole band is doing.
>
>   When the recorder comes back in I would have considered the guitar
> parts be brighter electrics without so much distortion to sort of
> revisit how the song started. Or maybe double up the electric with an
> acoustic for a richer tonality. Again, I'm trying to ensure each
> instrument fills up a sound space without stepping all over someone
> elses' sound.
>
>   OK, so I liked the music. I think the playing could get polished a
> bit more. I think the instruments are interesting but stepping on each
> other a bit, but overall the results are good.
>
> cheers,
> Mark



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Truly yours, Oleg Ivanenko aka Ash
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