[LAU] I Flying - new instrumental

[Oleg Ivanenko]

Hi, all!

I've recently finished long-awaited(for me) instrumental composition
(http://www.archive.org/download/IFlying/Ash_Ya_Lechu_I_Flying_986.mp3)
and need your opinions about it. If you please, tell me about my
composition/arrangement/performance/mastering etc mistakes. Sorry for
my English :)

-- 
Truly yours, Oleg Ivanenko aka Ash
[if it wasn't so sad, it would be funny]