15 Jan
2003
15 Jan
'03
4:31 a.m.
On Tue, Jan 14, 2003 at 10:01:44PM -0500, Paul Davis wrote:
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also, for folks here who are not on ardour-dev, please
critique this:
http://www.op.net/~pbd/brochure.pdf
Read it and the only thing I could come up with,
was an extra hyphen, which is undecided in English anyway :)
[twenty first -> twenty-first]
Also a minor nit:
The text under the screenshot on the first page
seems somewhat oddly aligned ?
But for the rest, perfect,
v