Re: [LAU] Packet In's new song about Jack

On Tuesday 03 March 2009 17:39:58 Bengt Gördén wrote: The Audacity of Hope Copyright 2009, drew Roberts (I will try and do a spoken word vocal for this guys) Released under a Creative Commons Attribution-Share Alike 3.0 United States License [P] People of the net! I am here today to talk to you of The Audacity of Hope. I am here to talk to you of Freedom. Freedom is not always free for you and me. No! Sometimes there is a high price to pay. Some say let freedom ring. Some say live free or die. Some speak of nothing left to lose. Some lose hope. I am here today to tell you that there is Freedom in Audacity. I am here to tell you that hope makes a sweet sound in Audacity. That although the price of Freedom may be high, Although the price of Hope may be high. The high price is worth it. The high price is lower than the price of the alternatives. The price of Audacity is lower still. Some say lock them down! Some call you thieves and pirates! I say freely grab some Audacity and freely hope. I say put Ardour in your heart and on your desk. I say Jack will be your friend. With hope, you may find Jack a better plumber than Joe. People of the net! Don't let them lock you down! Choose Freedom! Choose Hope! Choose Ardour! Choose Audacity! Lyrics: Cindy ------------- Verse1: Cindy was a big girl Beauty queen Cindy was a sweet girl Young man's dream Cindy took me places Never been Cindy broke my heart Left for the green Chorus: Doin' this all for you, 'cause you like it Writin' this song for you, 'cause you like it Going thorugh all these shoes, 'cause you like it Leavin' me all these clues, that you like it. Verse2: Cindy was a looker Made the scene Cindy took me higher Fall and scream Cindy dropped me harder She's extreme Cindy burned my mind She's surpreme ??? Chorus (repeat) Fadeout: Cindy wake up (repeat) ----- Unless shoes has special significance, may I suggest we change this line: Going through all these shoes, 'cause you like it to Living these painful blues, 'cause you like it or Going through all these blues, 'cause you like it or Going through painful blues, 'cause you like it Something along those lines. I saw the mention of a lyrical disconnect in irc last night: 00:45 < muhoo> ah, i see the disconnect 00:45 < muhoo> the chorus is happy, it's a love song. the verses are sad, it's a breakup song. Hmm. If overall we want this to be what you call the love song type, how about we leave verse one as is. Love then loss. And then make verse two love again, this time right... Will try for an all love song below too: ----- Verse1: Cindy is a big girl Beauty queen Cindy is a sweet girl Young man's dream Cindy is a looker Makes the scene Cindy takes me places Never been Chorus: Doin' this all for you, 'cause you like it Writin' this song for you, 'cause you like it Going thorugh all these shoes, 'cause you like it Leavin' me all these clues, that you like it. Verse2: Cindy takes me higher Building steam Cindy blows my mind now She's extreme Cindy lights my fire Shout and scream Cindy burns my heart She's surpreme ??? Chorus (repeat) Fadeout: Cindy wake up (repeat) ----- drew did the verses on cindy Lyrics by Drew Roberts & Julien Claassen ------------------------------------------- [chorus] Eca's running, she's running with a dangerous crowd She's living, she's living, but her sound is to loud She's wondering, she's wondering, how she'd look in a shroud Well she's running, she's running with a dangerous crowd [verse] Lash is running, he's running with a dangerous crowd He wants her, he wants her, cause she's so well endowed But he told her one day: "Just get off of my cloud!" Yes he's running, he's running with a dangerous crowd. - Lash is daemon, who's face is disguised. Unable of speakin', what Eca's devised. He blocked all the doors, which Eca so prised, Yes Lash is a daemon and she is surprised. [chorus] Eca's running, she's running with a dangerous crowd She's living, she's living, but her sound is to loud She's wondering, she's wondering, how she'd look in a shroud Well she's running, she's running with a dangerous crowd - Eca's running, she's running with a dangerous crowd Her daddy, her daddy, why is he never proud Eca's sound just leaks out, though she lives in a cloud Well she's running, she's running with a dangerous crowd [verse] Lash is running, he's running with a dangerous crowd His mother, his mother, why does she scream 'n' shout He tries and he tries but she never is wowed Yes he's running, he's running with a dangerous crowd - Lash adores and adores her, but never enough. He dislikes and distastes her, but it's only a bluff. He cries and he cries and he cries - all too tough. Yes Lash is a daemon, but even they love. [chorus] Eca's running, she's running with a dangerous crowd She's living, she's living, but her sound is to loud She's wondering, she's wondering, how she'd look in a shroud Well she's running, she's running with a dangerous crowd - Eca's running, she's running with a dangerous crowd, She's getting her daemons and Greeks all about, She's telling her father and the whole world aloud: "I'm breathing and living for my dangerous crowd!" Jack is my Jack but I still need a Jill Copyright 2009, drew Roberts Released under a Creative Commons Attribution-Share Alike 3.0 United States License [P] Song structure: refrain, verse1, chorus1, refrain solo on verse and chorus, chorus1, refrain verse2, chorus2, and out. Refrain Verse 1 It gets cold and lonely, in my studio at night Routing all these sounds around, by electric light I need me a country girl, to fill me with delight One who will not lead me on, but snuggle in real tight Chorus 1 Yes Jack is still my jack, but I still need a Jill A down home sweet good looker, who will give me all my thrills A woman who would stand by me, when my well runs dry A sweet thing who will lift me up, when I need to fly Refrain Solo on verse chords Solo on chorus chords Chorus 1 Yes Jack is still my jack, but I still need a Jill A down home sweet good looker, who will give me all my thrills A woman who would stand by me, when my well runs dry A sweet thing who will lift me up, when I need to fly Refrain Verse 2 Well I may be an island boy, but I got Free software skills And one thing that I love at night, is music from these hills With Ardour on my screen, and ardour in my heart I can hug and squeeze her, while I'm tracking her real smart. Chorus 2 Yes Jack is still my jack, but I still need a Jill A woman who would follow me, up and down these hills Whether life should treat me good, or treat me real bad A sweet thing who would truly be, the best I ever had Refrain and out Love Me Copyright 2009, drew Roberts Released under a Creative Commons Attribution-Share Alike 3.0 United States License [P] Love me, love me, love me, love me Like a rising star Love me, love me, love me, love me Like a jazzk guitar Love me, love me, love me, love me Like a super star Love me, love me, love me, love me Like a red sports car Love me, love me girl Yes love me love me baby Yes love me baby Love me, love me girl Yes love me love me baby Yes love me love me love me all the time Take me, take me, take me, take me Like a shooting star Take me, take me, take me, take me Like a rock guitar Take me, take me, take me, take me Like a crowded bar Take me, take me, take me, take me Like a red sports car Love me, love me girl Yes love me love me baby Yes love me baby Love me, love me girl Yes love me love me baby Yes love me love me love me all the time Burn me, burn me, burn me, burn me Like a falling star Burn me, burn me, burn me, burn me Like a blues guitar Burn me, burn me, burn me, burn me Like a bridge too far Burn me, burn me, burn me, burn me Like a red sports car not all the verses made it in. OK, I've done a quick fill in on the lyrics I was involved with. Guys? drew