17 Aug
2009
17 Aug
'09
4:03 p.m.
"Jostein Chr. Andersen" [jostein(a)vait.se] kirjoitti:
Hi,
I listened to it.
I have an opinion about lyrics and how to express them in music. To me, non-native
english, they were not so clear. Keep in mind that for a radio piece of music you have
those 3 minutes to play on, on that time all should get what you mean. Further, in theatre
and music, it is important to be overclear, express yourself clearly, you might feel that
you exaggerate(if that is english) the lyrics then, but that is better than the opposite.
And maybe somewhat slower than now, because the listener has to follow, for someone
hearing the tune for the first time must easily be able to hear the lyrics. Now, as you
sing the lyrics it is self clear for you ( as you created them) what you mean, but for
someone first time listener it is not.
just my opinion, keep up the good work.
;-)
Greger
On Monday August 17 2009 17.15.08 Carlo Capocasa
wrote:
--
Did I get that right, you didn't hear the
drums at all?
I did hear a very low kick, snare and Hi-Hat on very moderate volume. My
suggestion is that you do something more funky and human like.
But you should _not_ follow my suggestions if you happens to like the things
the way they are, or you just don't like my suggestions, and if this is your
style, then forget what I think. If you want to do it the way you already
have (that can be very cool), then you should probably try to clean it up and
work further with it.
Jostein
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