On Sun, Oct 08, 2006 at 01:03:06AM +0100, Folderol wrote:
The same tune, slightly changed but with quite different
instrumentation. Doesn't sound like the same thing at all!
http://www.musically.me.uk/music/Running_Through_The_Night.ogg
Much better. I like the echoey saw synth.
Not sure about what Jordan said, but the synth-string pad
could do with longer attack.
Pad and organ are both way too clean.
I would try a pitch envelope on the strings, making them start
tuned down a bit and fading in some vibrato (slightly different
for each voice might be optimal)
The organ asks for tube amp / tube warmth and perhaps leslie.
But the notes themselves could be improved. No strong point
of my own music ... but anyway: Especialy at the start, the
lead should be more staccato. A bit short-breathed, impulsive.
Try increasing the whole tempo, it's not jogging through the
night, right?
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Thorsten Wilms