[LAU] Mix feedback on a new track?

Hi all, I just did a rough mix on a track... well, I think a little better than a rough mix, but I can't go much further without some other ears having a listen. All audio synthesis is in SuperCollider running in Ubuntu; then I recorded stems on disk and loaded those up into Ardour (2) for easier control over the mix. A variety of influences at play here -- hope some of you enjoy it! Generally I'd put it under the electronica label, though it doesn't exactly fit. http://www.dewdrop-world.net/audio/wiggle-room4.mp3 I'm using CC-BY-NC-SA for this, as I usually do -- tagged as such in the MP3 comment field. Thanks! hjh Sent with AquaMail for Android http://www.aqua-mail.com