Hello Will!
this is a beautiful tune.
In terms of change I had two ideas, while I listened to it: Could you backup
the lead-strings in the theme startin at 1:06min or again at 3:15min... Cou8ld
you backup the strings there with a haaa-choir-sound, just softly. You could
pan the sounds slightly in different directions and gain even more greatness
at that point.
Another thing was, that I could hear a phaser on the strings in the same
section. Perhaps the calf phaser might be a good point to start
experimentation.
Hm, why not also double the pad, that does the chords at that time and move
them apart in the stereo panorama as well? I would sound gorgeous, doubled
perhaps with strings or anythying, that has clearer overtones.
As I said, it's a nice song as it is. I like the tuen and I already like the
improvements, that you have done to it in this version. But you asked for
more. :-) - I could mention the passing thought of adding a sound of flowing
water to the part, where the flute comes in. You can certainly do such sounds
with white noise,slightly resonant filter and S&H or probably an LFO in random
mode.
Warm regards
Julien
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