Probably a bit of everything -- might be as easy to do it on the master bus.
Q
On 01/05/13 22:32, James Stone wrote:
  Thanks for listening, and thanks for the comments.. I
will continue
 tweaking :)
 What were you thinking I could cut low-mids from?
 James
 On Wed, May 1, 2013 at 8:20 PM, Q <lists(a)quirq.ukfsn.org
 <mailto:lists@quirq.ukfsn.org>> wrote:
     On 01/05/13 09:27, James Stone wrote:
         HI Everyone,
         Here is a song I recorded with a friend of mine who is a Nepalese
         singer, and one of his friends who played the guitar and bass on the
         track. It has taken me ages to get round to finishing it,
         because I was
         having real troubles coming up with some drums that fitted the
         song OK.
         This is the current version, mixed in Mixbus. I would appreciate any
         thoughts on the song, and also the mix.
         
https://soundcloud.com/__jmstone/roughmix2/download/s-__qgo8P
         <https://soundcloud.com/jmstone/roughmix2/download/s-qgo8P>
         James
     Hi
     Just had a listen to this and it sounds pretty nice as it stands.
     You could probably clear out the low mids a little to improve
     clarity, but don't overdo it or you'll lose too much warmth.
     The vocal drops in and out a bit, especially early on (I think it's
     probably the lower register bits that are most affected). I guess
     it'd probably be better to automate the volume rather than compress,
     although some light compression mightn't go astray. The guitar has a
     tendency to overpower the vocal as well, but it might be okay once
     the vocal level is higher, but if not, maybe EQ the guitar a bit to
     reduce the clash.
     The main guitar solo (from 3.10) needs to be more upfront I'd say,
     lose a lot of the reverb and it'd be a lot better. Perhaps use some
     delay to make it big without pushing it into the background like the
     reverb's doing. It's a bit thin sounding as well and the level a bit
     inconsistent.
     It's a pleasant sounding piece, nice and mellow. Nice playing and
     the singer's got a good voice. However, with not being able to infer
     any emotional intensity from the vocals, it all sounds a bit flat,
     on the same level -- the piece could do with some contour to it, a
     sense of building and releasing in the music.
     Q