Re: [LAU] Any lyrics please?

Here is my try at composing a lyric, never done such thing before in this fashion in a great while so please take it with a grain of salt and you dont have to use it if its crap, or doesnt fit your style, whatever. A Wonderfull Day I want to see your crystal eyes Even knowing they are just a lie A robotic sound might emphasize The truth i share in my synthetic dice No, no, no, you dont know Knowing is not how you will find The truth lies on a sober heart And this my friend i dare to say Lets make a perfect union My sober heart and your crystal eyes Spliced in one million bytes Flowing trough a great river Reaching grandma dad and son I could go even further Not today, nor tomorrow let the time decides its way Rest in peace a wonderfull day Thanks. It looks good :-) Well, I cannot say I will use it. I will meditate on it. I want to feel it and if it triggers emotions, then I'll be able to try compose accordingly.. If I use it, the idea is that I want to make many versions with the same lyrics..and share it with you..so you can say which one you prefer or you think is more appropriate with the lyrics context..