27 May
2006
27 May
'06
11:51 a.m.
On Sat, 2006-05-27 at 17:14 +0700, Patrick Shirkey wrote:
How would I ever make my work better if I didn't know what was wrong
with it? And honest criticism is a very good way to find out what's
wrong with it.
If you
don't mind me asking - what did you dislike about firelightless?
Be honest now...
Hi John,
Well you asked for it... :) --
- The violin comes in very sharp on the very first second of the song.
- Then there are certain pitches that the singer sounds quite flat on.
Particularly the highest notes. Otherwise her voice is well fitted to
the over feeling of the song.
- There are a couple of points where the timing is lost in the center of
the track.
Thanks - that's really useful. Now, where did I put that Antares... :-)
bye
John