14 Apr
2006
14 Apr
'06
7:23 p.m.
Sup Thorsten!
The Intro is Earth-Shaking. Good Stuff. Hard techno and borderline
psychedelic. Almost a tune I could hear played in St. Gallen's very own
ElectroKeller.
But then the melody comes in and ruins it. Off the top of my head I'd
scrap the melody completely and use the harmonies VERY sparingly as
orchestra jabs.
I'd also get a title that sounds 'cool' :)
Carlo