Re: [LAU] I Flying - new instrumental

  When the first electric guitar comes in I think it's the wrong electric guitar. The type of distorion seems to cover too much spectrum and messes with the sounds of the other instruments.

  The drums and bass aren't bad, but I think the drum sound is again sort of hidden at times by the guitar distortion.   When we get to the fast portion I think the distorted guitars sound good here, although they are as someone else said quite like Hotel California in terms of what the whole band is doing.   When the recorder comes back in I would have considered the guitar parts be brighter electrics without so much distortion to sort of revisit how the song started. Or maybe double up the electric with an acoustic for a richer tonality. Again, I'm trying to ensure each instrument fills up a sound space without stepping all over someone elses' sound.   OK, so I liked the music. I think the playing could get polished a bit more. I think the instruments are interesting but stepping on each other a bit, but overall the results are good. cheers, Mark