Nicely done! All synthesized? I think it needs a movie to go with it.
Folderol wrote:
  Once again thank you both for your comments... and
your patience!
 I have now finalised this and put it up on my website. The last significant
 change I made was to lift the key from Em to Gm. This seems to make a surprising
 difference.
 
http://www.musically.me.uk/music/In_Search_Of_The_Lost_Tribes.ogg
 And a new back story to go with it :)
 "The travellers return to find their homes empty, with not a sign of their
 families and friends visible in the ruins of their village, nor the neighbouring
 villages. Indeed, even the great city is deserted and starting to decay, but
 there they find a clue.
 A city scribe has left a tantalising scrap of paper that notes all must leave.
 There are details how, but no explanation of why, nor where the tribes will go.
 The travellers rest for a few days while they consider their options, then with
 heavy hearts begin their search, having idea of when or whether they will be
 reunited with their loved ones. "