On Sat, 2009-08-29 at 22:11 -0700, Llewellyn Beasley wrote:
The guitars are played by me and recorded in Ardour,
the vocals are
mine but I sampled them and triggered them using Specimen and my
keyboard, I played all the synths which are mostly VSTs but there is
some ZynAddSubFX in there too. All the midi was recorded into
Rosegarden and the drums are Addictive Drums again triggered by my
keyboard. Very interested in hearing comments and such.
http://www.slavetothesun.com/drupal/sites/default/files/08%20-%20Slave
%20To%20The%20Sun%20-%20Untitled_0.mp3
There are vocals in there? :)
I would play with the 2 identical guitar notes at the end of bars,
leaving one out each second iteration, or something like that.
Drums seem to be very late on 2 and 4.
I would shorten the whole piece (taking from each part, to not change
the overall arrangement). It's nice stuff, but seems a bit stretched out
to me.
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