On Sat, 19 Sep 2009 22:48:16 +0200
"Jostein Chr. Andersen" <jostein(a)vait.se> wrote:
Hi Robert,
On Saturday September 19 2009 20.52.31 Robert Jonsson wrote:
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Comments and critique are quite welcome!
I've been listening to this great song two times (downloaded it ten minutes
ago), and here is mys first quick impressions:
Starting with the good stuff first (and this is the most important): Great
singing and voice and great song! And all that musical things with instruments
and vocals that happens on the chorus makes me wanna play the song over and
over - "skitbra"! :-) You have also done a good job in separating the
instruments in the mix.
Now, some words about the arrangement and the production: The way you compress
your vocals (and adds some dist?), and cuts frequencies is a little bit much -
I know: it's quite common to do it this days, but I think your voice have
qualities that deserves a better treatment. Another word about the drums: The
HH do have way to high volume and the song will benefit if you do some "pedal
Hi-hat" in 4/4 when playing on the toms; the float stops when the HH stops.
Also consider to use some decaying instrument in the choruses.
Did you sit a little long time when mixing? I hope you take some rest from the
song and try one more time. You and this song deserves to be heard by a big
audience :-)
Jostein
I more or less agree with this. You seem to have succumbed to the
'loudness war' and this has taken almost all expression out of your
song :(
--
Will J Godfrey