Greetings,
Following a suggestion from GarryO I've revised the piece with a
slightly longer ending and significant amplitude reduction at some
threatening peaks. The new versions are here:
http://linux-sound.org/audio/studiodave-avs_p01_090805.ogg
http://linux-sound.org/audio/studiodave-avs_p01_090805.mp3
And following Ken R's suggestion I've removed the scary quotation marks
in the subject line. :)
Comments welcome, as always.
Best,
dp