23 Mar
2005
23 Mar
'05
4:29 a.m.
Shayne O'Connor a écrit :
hi all
i've just finished re-recording a track i linked to the list a few weeks
ago ... i've tried incorporating some suggestions, and most importantly
- i think my guitar is in tune!
http://www.machinehasnoagenda.com/downloads/the_girls_-_the_sailor_(final).…
i think it sounds heaps better than the previous version, but it doesn't
really matter in any case, as it is more just one of a few tracks i'm
throwing together for a band i'm trying to get happening ...
but if anyone still wants to try their hand at mixing this song, just
let me know and i'll see if i can pack up the tracks into a torrent file.
should have my next one up soon.
shayne
Hi shayne
Nice song but as james said I think you can improved your mix again.
Global impressions :
- the drums are to much in the background for my taste.
- the beginning of the song is a little muddy, the combinaison of the
vocal, background vocal and rythm guitar is maybe a little to much in
the mid-low mid range, things become much more clear after 1:20.
What I would try :
- A little more drum
- A little less rythm guitar before 1:20 or maybe just less low-mid on
this track
- Something can be done also on the background vocal before 1:20, after
they are fine but before they are maybe to much present.
Just my 2 € cents ;-)
Christophe