Hello Loki!
I just listened to it. No, I don't think that the two basses are too much.
You could even get away with the two leads... :-) They sometimes seem a bit
sluggish to me. Beyond that they're nice and different enough in timbre.
One thing I would like about this piece is, if you raised the volume of the
vocal track(s) relative to the rest.
Kindest regards
Julien
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