On Thu, 25 Jan 2007 09:29:41 +0000
James Stone <jamesmstone(a)gmail.com> wrote:
On Wed, Jan 24, 2007 at 09:54:49PM -0800, Florin
Andrei wrote:
Folderol wrote:
Hey, that's pretty good!
Needs a bit more tightening all around. The material is good but needs
to spend a bit more time in the mixing phase. The various tracks are not
100% "aligned" from a sound perspective.
E.g., the instrument that kicks in at 00:08 - you don't want a sound
that "shiny" in this kind of song. I see what you're trying to convey,
but it's a tad too sandpaper-ish. I wonder if a very gentle low-pass
will make it blend more naturally.
I think it sounds like it was supposed to be bagpipes to me.. but
bagpipes are some of the worst midi voices ever.. Also it would need
a drone to be authentic. Also the bodhran doesn't sound too
authentic.
That's the main lead instrument. I think the other poster was referring
to the 'deep chimes' sound.
I was a bit undecided whether to go for a bagpipe like sound or a
flute. I tried a flute originally but it was too smooth and got buried
by the other instruments later on. I think it definitely has to be a
reed instrument of some sort, but bagpipes have a particular sort of
squeak or chirp that is never the same twice and virtually impossible
to emulate!
I like the song, but to my ears the midi soundcanvas
sound is
horrible. I particularly hate that new-age synthy sound.. perhaps
that's just me though. I wonder if some of the FluidG3 soundfont
sounds would be better. It's a shame there isn't anything like
the Edirol orchestra vst for Linux.. Also I agree the note start
timings are a bit delayed in places..
Again, I don't want to overwork the timings. Apart from the background,
all parts were played in real time and, although I will do more work, I
don't want to mechanicalise them - that's a good word :)
Overall very nice composition though!
James
Thanks
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Will J G