On Sun, Dec 14, 2008 at 08:47:29PM +0000, Folderol wrote: Nice song, nice voice ! I guess you're monitoring on a system that lacks the lower bass - here (on a calibrated and room-equalised system) the result is very bass-heavy. If you have an Ardour session of this I'd love to have a go at remixing it ! Ciao, -- FA Laboratorio di Acustica ed Elettroacustica Parma, Italia O tu, che porte, correndo si ? E guerra e morte !

Folderol wrote: Very nice! I like your voice and everything is very moody. The drums are the best I heard from you so far! I think the brass sound in the last "verse" is taking things in a different direction, though, I'd just leave them out if it was me. I only listened on laptop, so cannot comment on the boomy bass... -- Atte http://atte.dk http://modlys.dk

Folderol wrote: very nice song and performance. the sound of the vocals is really good. and now for the nitpicking :-D to me it sounds a little odd that the organ constantly plays "colla parte" with the vocals. in this composition, it makes some sense by adding a "droning quality" (in the positive sense) together with the way the same melody is used as an interlude. but generally i think your intonation is good enough that you could take some more freedom with the accompaniment in other tunes (and there is absolutely no dishonor in using a colla parte instrument during recording to help nailing the intonation and get rid of it in the final mix. what, me do such things? never!) the only thing i did not like was the synth syncopations at the end. they disturb the drone and don't add weight to the ending, only unrest. i could imagine the very same notes, but played a lot more laid back and maybe with a rhodes sound, to have a better effect. but then, nitpicking is always easy. thanks for sharing this song, and keep 'em coming! best, jörn -- jörn nettingsmeier home://germany/45128 essen/lortzingstr. 11/ http://spunk.dnsalias.org phone://+49/201/491621