Mark Knecht wrote: Good song! What is the chord scheme? One comment about the lyrics.... The sentence which tell about your woman and your best friend... I dunno, it's maybe a bit to direct and to cliche too..? Maybe you could build up the tension it bit more through the song? Maybe you can state it, so people don't hear you say it directly, but knowing what is happening here clearly... Just an tip, I'm not an experienced lyric writer at all... \r

2009/6/8 Dave Phillips <dlphillips(a)woh.rr.com>om>: hope you won't have this kind of blues at breakfast every day... :-) About using ardour more efficently I want to share this very proof. The following songs has been recorded by the other guitar player of my band, he doesn't speak english and linux was (and probably still is) completely obscure to him. We have a i386 in our rehearsal "room" with debian lenny and Ardour2.8 on it, a mackie 12ch, a Terratec EWS88MT, one SM58 and acouple of PG58. Well, I showed him Ardour, created a song-template and learned him how to use it in a couple of hours. He is now an enthusiastic Ardour fan! This are two of the ~10 tracks he recorded (without any help) in the last 3 months, words are just an "imitation" of the english language, words assonance... anyway it doesn't matter, we are going to sing this in italian ;-) He played and sang on all tracks except djembe (recorded by me and our ex-drummer using 2 pg58) I did some mixing and Jamin has been used for post-prod only on the first song. http://linee-distorte.googlegroups.com/web/Evribadiloviddiu.mp3?gda=HxCbWEU… http://linee-distorte.googlegroups.com/web/saylen.mp3?hl=en&gda=jzEm3jw…