9 Oct
2022
9 Oct
'22
2:20 p.m.
Hey hey,
this is the latest song, inheriting from many genres, a little pop, funk,
something Arabesque, something Tropical and something Asian (Japanese):
https://youtu.be/1R3ROM1zI_4
OGG version:
https://www.dropbox.com/s/5bqgwpsrpi36s39/papaya.ogg
(Lyrics at the end of this message)
Instruments: Yoshimi (choir pad, bell, e-piano and clave), drumgizmo (with the
Aasmonster2 kit), LinuxSampler (AVL Tabla, bass, Mellotron strings, guitars),
Csound (guiro and FX cymbals). In hardware: Waldorf Microwave Xt (electronic
bass), Behringer Neutron (brass lead and hard kick), RD-8 (808
drums/percussion). I think that's it.
Thaks to autotalent for supporting my mediocre efforts in the verses. :)
This song for once tells two small stories/episodes. It's about realising what
is there and making the best of it.
Best wishes,
Jeanette
*** Lyrics ***
On a rainy day,
She ducks into a bookstore.
Out of courtesy
She buys a book on Ewe folklore.
Next thing you know
She's gonna go
And learn the lingo.
Not practical, but logical (who cares)
She's on sabbatical.
Eight years later she's mistress of the kidi
She's found her home in the band.
-
Give that girl a big banana,
'Cause she sees what's in front of her eyes.
If she sees a ripe papaya,
She'll make her catch fresh from the skies.
Tamsyn's heart is broken,
All relationships just die.
Even sweet and lovely Daniel
Couldn't make her bounce and fly.
She still went to that club tonight
To dance the pain away.
And there she found that smile so bright,
Now Lisa's here to stay.
-
Give that girl a big banana,
'Cause she sees what's in front of her eyes.
If she sees a ripe papaya,
She'll make her catch fresh from the skies.
*** END ***
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Say hello to the girl that I am! <3
(Britney Spears)
10 Oct
10 Oct
2:13 p.m.
Hi Jeanette,
Ok, a whole album in one song. Only someone who is not afraid of running out of ideas can
allow herself something like that;-)
I find the drums very nicely polished, especially the work with the hihat and cymbals.
There are many little fills/modulations/additions to discover.
I really like the solo sound from 3:10 (I think it can be heard a bit further in the
background before). It reminds me of a muted trumpet. The arabic-inspired melody line is
also nice.
However, I would have made the mix a little denser to give the quite complex structure
more cohesion.
Oh and: beautiful vocals!
Holger
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9. Oktober 2022 12:21, "Jeanette C." <julien(a)mail.upb.de> schrieb:
Hey hey,
this is the latest song, inheriting from many genres, a little pop, funk,
something Arabesque, something Tropical and something Asian (Japanese):
https://youtu.be/1R3ROM1zI_4
OGG version:
https://www.dropbox.com/s/5bqgwpsrpi36s39/papaya.ogg
(Lyrics at the end of this message)
Instruments: Yoshimi (choir pad, bell, e-piano and clave), drumgizmo (with the
Aasmonster2 kit), LinuxSampler (AVL Tabla, bass, Mellotron strings, guitars),
Csound (guiro and FX cymbals). In hardware: Waldorf Microwave Xt (electronic
bass), Behringer Neutron (brass lead and hard kick), RD-8 (808
drums/percussion). I think that's it.
Thaks to autotalent for supporting my mediocre efforts in the verses. :)
This song for once tells two small stories/episodes. It's about realising what
is there and making the best of it.
Best wishes,
Jeanette
*** Lyrics ***
On a rainy day,
She ducks into a bookstore.
Out of courtesy
She buys a book on Ewe folklore.
Next thing you know
She's gonna go
And learn the lingo.
Not practical, but logical (who cares)
She's on sabbatical.
Eight years later she's mistress of the kidi
She's found her home in the band.
-
Give that girl a big banana,
'Cause she sees what's in front of her eyes.
If she sees a ripe papaya,
She'll make her catch fresh from the skies.
Tamsyn's heart is broken,
All relationships just die.
Even sweet and lovely Daniel
Couldn't make her bounce and fly.
She still went to that club tonight
To dance the pain away.
And there she found that smile so bright,
Now Lisa's here to stay.
-
Give that girl a big banana,
'Cause she sees what's in front of her eyes.
If she sees a ripe papaya,
She'll make her catch fresh from the skies.
*** END ***
--
* Website: http://juliencoder.de - for summer is a state of sound
* Youtube: https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCMS4rfGrTwz8W7jhC1Jnv7g
* Audiobombs: https://www.audiobombs.com/users/jeanette_c
* GitHub: https://github.com/jeanette-c
Say hello to the girl that I am! <3
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2:36 p.m.
Hello Holger,
first of all, many thanks for your kind words and detailed comment.
Oct 10 2022, Holger Dehnhardt has written:
...
I find the drums very nicely polished, especially the
work with the hihat and cymbals. There are many little fills/modulations/additions to
discover.
I am very fond of drums. :) And this drum kit just invites you to polish
your handy work. I am a finger drummer. So I play them live, with some
quantisation afterwards. In this instance I filled some gaps with more
synthetic drums and other percussion. When it works, I find that this
approach really livens up the rhythm.
I really like the solo sound from 3:10
This is
the Neutron hardware synth, though any (virtual( analogue
subtractive would have done.
...
However, I would have made the mix a little denser to
give the quite complex structure more cohesion.
In which way do you mean? More
instruments (perhaps pads and simple
chord instruments) or a different balance between the sounds that are
there?
Oh and: beautiful vocals!
Thanks! <3
...
Best wishes,
Jeanette
P.S.: thanks for top posting, I hope the inline style is also fine for
you.
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* Youtube: https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCMS4rfGrTwz8W7jhC1Jnv7g
* Audiobombs: https://www.audiobombs.com/users/jeanette_c
* GitHub: https://github.com/jeanette-c
I used to think
I had the answers to everything
But now I know
... :) <3
(Britney Spears)
3:42 p.m.
Hi Jeanette,
...
Of course not more instruments. I was thinking more of making everything sound more
'In a room'.
A common reverb for some of the tracks or some (more?) compression on the master bus.
Sometimes I also find that some slight saturation brings the glue effect.
But: This is of course a matter of taste.
Holger
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holger(a)dehnhardt.org
However, I would have made the mix a little
denser to give the quite complex structure more
cohesion.
In which way do you mean? More instruments (perhaps pads and simple
chord instruments) or a different balance between the sounds that are
there?
4:04 p.m.
Thanks for the clarification. I know that I am on the timid side when it comes
to overall compression. I haven't yet found the plugin and settings for that
subtle saturation that glues, polishes, but doesn't destroy or overly colour.
I'll take that as motivation to create a test session dedicated to finding
that and honing in on the details.
Best wishes and thanks again,
Jeanette
Oct 10 2022, Holger Dehnhardt has written:
Hi Jeanette,
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* Youtube: https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCMS4rfGrTwz8W7jhC1Jnv7g
* Audiobombs: https://www.audiobombs.com/users/jeanette_c
* GitHub: https://github.com/jeanette-c
I used to think
I had the answers to everything
But now I know
... :) <3
(Britney Spears)
...
Of course not more instruments. I was thinking more of making everything sound more
'In a room'.
A common reverb for some of the tracks or some (more?) compression on the master bus.
Sometimes I also find that some slight saturation brings the glue effect.
But: This is of course a matter of taste.
Holger
____________________
Holger Dehnhardt
holger(a)dehnhardt.org
However, I would have made the mix a little
denser to give the quite complex structure more
cohesion.
In which way do you mean? More instruments (perhaps pads and simple
chord instruments) or a different balance between the sounds that are
there? 
13 Oct
13 Oct
2:36 p.m.
Well this creates quite a conflict for me. I can appreciate the quality of your
work here, but the song style doesn't appeal at all - maybe I'm just getting
old {smirk}
--
Will J Godfrey {apparently now an 'elderly'}
https://willgodfrey.bandcamp.com/
http://yoshimi.github.io
Say you have a poem and I have a tune.
Exchange them and we can both have a poem, a tune, and a song.
2:58 p.m.
Hello Will,
there's no need to be in conflict. We all have our tastes and they differ. It
would be sad and boring if we liked the same music exactly. I appreciate your
kind feedback on the quality and take it as a compliment that you took the
time to comment.
Best wishes,
Jeanny
Oct 13 2022, Will Godfrey has written:
Well this creates quite a conflict for me. I can
appreciate the quality of your
work here, but the song style doesn't appeal at all - maybe I'm just getting
old {smirk}
--
Will J Godfrey {apparently now an 'elderly'}
https://willgodfrey.bandcamp.com/
http://yoshimi.github.io
Say you have a poem and I have a tune.
Exchange them and we can both have a poem, a tune, and a song.
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With you I get so high
Lost in the crystal sky
You are this melody
That's where you take me <3
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