Folderol wrote:
Hey, that's pretty good!
Needs a bit more tightening all around. The material is good but needs
to spend a bit more time in the mixing phase. The various tracks are not
100% "aligned" from a sound perspective.
E.g., the instrument that kicks in at 00:08 - you don't want a sound
that "shiny" in this kind of song. I see what you're trying to convey,
but it's a tad too sandpaper-ish. I wonder if a very gentle low-pass
will make it blend more naturally.
Anyway, that's just me picking nits. The song is good. My 5yr old son is
sitting nearby humming it. :-)
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Florin Andrei
http://florin.myip.org/