On Wed, 24 Jan 2007 21:54:49 -0800
Florin Andrei <florin(a)andrei.myip.org> wrote:
Folderol wrote:
Hey, that's pretty good!
Thanks very much :)
Needs a bit more tightening all around. The material
is good but needs
to spend a bit more time in the mixing phase. The various tracks are not
100% "aligned" from a sound perspective.
E.g., the instrument that kicks in at 00:08 - you don't want a sound
that "shiny" in this kind of song. I see what you're trying to convey,
but it's a tad too sandpaper-ish. I wonder if a very gentle low-pass
will make it blend more naturally.
Yes I have been thinking along those lines myself. I might do some
more work on it this weekend, but don't want to overwork it if you see
what I mean, so may just leave it a while and come back to it fresh.
Anyway, that's just me picking nits. The song is
good. My 5yr old son is
sitting nearby humming it. :-)
Someone humming along to a tune is the best I could ever wish for!
--
Will J G