Hi Massy!
Hm, maybe you might have gone with some different compression on the bass
and thus tried to keep the low-midhump more behaved. I don't know.
The reverb is very modestly applied. A touch more might not have been bad,
same room sizes, IR-reverbs. But that's all personal taste.
For the widening of the parnorama. You might have experimented with some
very short stereo delay on the tracks, thus keeping some glue on a very
reduced level. Delay length between 12-18ms. I've had good experiences with
the etd and 2143. Lately the latter is my favourite, I have more control over
it.
Did you apply some highpass filter to the guitars? You could you know, same
for the vocals. probably take a filter with a shallow slope, seeing, that the
arrangement is that small.
Warmly yours
Julien
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