Hello Josh! I like your tango. Perhaps nothing original in the chord progression, but it has the flair. Nicely done, very minimalistic and in that lies its secret. Only one thing I would have liked in addition: When you have the breaks, it would have been nice to mimic them with the drums. esides that, definitely something I'm going to remember. Kindly yours, Julien -------- Music was my first love and it will be my last (John Miles) ======== FIND MY WEB-PROJECT AT: ======== http://ltsb.sourceforge.net the Linux TextBased Studio guide ======= AND MY PERSONAL PAGES AT: ======= http://www.juliencoder.de

Josh Lawrence wrote: Hey, nice tune. What piano it this, sounds great! Everything is just fine. -- Atte http://atte.dk http://modlys.dk http://virb.com/atte

I guess it's all personal taste, so here I am: The melody is brilliant in its simplicity. In the arrangement, there are too many middle frequencies - piano and snare. The left hand of the piano plays the bass line, but the sound is too hard for me. So, I hear double-bass (low frq) I hear hi-hat, and I hear cymbal in the B-part (high frq) Also, I hear organ in the A-part, to soften the rhythm bit, but I also hear pizzicato strings, to spice it up gently. I hear strings in the B-part. Well, I was really inspired by that tune, thus I sat down and on Muse did a quick arrangements with the sounds I hear. I will post it personally to you though, and then you decide what you do with it. I was just playing with the music, probably relaxing at the end of the first half-term here in the English schools. Cheers - Viktor Mastoridis Music-o-graph & Educator www.meditera.co.uk